BEGINNING

Characters:

- Spirit: a 7-year-old girl who loves planes and has a difficult life, named Spirit because she has a spirited personality and is determined

- Pilots: the pilots of the plane

Setting:

- Year: 2025

- Location: Plane flying from Vancouver to Halifax

MIDDLE

Problem:

- The oxygen panel is set incorrectly, causing a dangerous situation on the plane

Response:

- Spirit uses her bravery and quick thinking to address the problem

- She uses an extra oxygen mask to reach the cockpit and safely land the plane in Toronto

- However, she breathes in smoke during the landing and gets hurt

END

Resolution:

- Spirit goes to the hospital immediately due to the smoke inhalation and the injuries she sustained during the landing

- While in the hospital, Spirit meets her new mom and siblings, bringing her happiness despite the challenges she faced

- The story concludes with Spirit adjusting to her new life with her new family and dealing with her ongoing breathing troubles

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I was looking out the plane window, thinking: Why did my mom not like me???? I was sitting alone but with other kids going for adoption behind and in front of me. Suddenly the Oxygen Masks dropped. I shrieked. A crew member earlier whispered to another in front of me 1758. A crew member right away said: " Do not panic!!! Put your masks on, covering your nose and mouth and breath normal!! "After 5 minutes and no word from the pilots I got up. "SPIRIT! SIT BACK DOWN!!!" Screamed someone that worked for the adoption center. I breathed into with the extra oxygen masks that were down. I ran to the cockpit and did 1758. It worked!!

I was very surprised seeing the pilots on the ground. " AirCanada8481 do you copy?? AirCanada990 do you still have connection with me?" I sat down in the captions seat. "Hi this is AirCanada8481, is this Toronto approach?" "Yes it is, are you a crew member?" "Nooooo, My name is Spirit, and I know a lot about planes, now can You give me instructions were to land??" Yes OK, go down to 5000 feet." " Going to 5000 feet, AirCanada990." I felt the air be easier to breath in.  "Is 27L free?" "Yes, 27L is free."

It was easier to breath for about a minute, then I started smelling smoke. "AirCanada8481, The tower can see you but were is your left engine?" "What?" I looked to the right, the right engine was on fire and the left one was just, gone. That must have being the turbelince earlier. I thought. That must be why some of the instruments on the left side aren't. Working. I heard the plane say 50 40 30 20 10. It hit the ground hard.

20 10. It hit the     ground hard. I breathed in lots of smoke. A crew member was carrying the passed out pilots out of the plane. It was 

Edmonton approach.