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In the beginning there were two smart snakes from the Alchemy time. 

They were smart but kind of stupid at the same time. Their names 

were Democritus, the quiet snake, and Aristotle, the loud snake. Both 

of them were trying to see what the “atom” was. Democritus thought 

atoms were small and different kinds of shapes. While Aristotle 

thought atoms didn't exists, instead the world was made just of wind, 

water,   fire, and earth; because that’s all he could see. Everybody 

didn't believe Democritus, the quite snake, so Aristotle and 

Democritus got mad at each other, and got into a fight. 

But along came the hard, small turtle name 

John Dalton. He agreed with Democritus that 

atoms were small and indivisible… So 

Aristotle got mad again and left them.

Dalton the turtle told Democritus, the quiet snake, that 

the atom is like a ball.. Hard and can’t be broken down. 

Democritus yelled out, “YEAH!! I was right for all of 

these years when everybody thought I was wrong.. but 

I wasn't!!! 

"Well I found out that atoms are small particles, they 

differ in small size and mass, I believe that is like a 

billiard ball small and hard!” Dalton told Democritus.

“Hey guys,” said JJ Thomson the Jaguar, “I found an 

AWESOME discovery!!! So… I have some bad news 

buds.. I guess the atom is not indivisible… It can be 

broken down, so it’s not a billiard ball! I found this with 

a thing called a cathode tube and I discovered the 

negative charge. I call it the ELECTRON!! And I now 

call it the plum pudding model!

Democritus and Dalton both walked away with 

shame….

Along came Ernest iguana he said,” Are you the one that 

found the electron?”

“Um yeah.. why?” Replied JJ Thomson. 

“Because I found the nucleus and there's positive stuff in 

the nucleus. When two positives hit they repel!”

“Really, how did you find that?” 

“When using the gold foil model and positive charge. 

Some went right through, while a few repeal.” “COOL!”

“Hey guys!!! Are you the two that came up with the 

electron and nucleus?” Said Bohr the Bear.

“Yeah,” they said together.

“Well I came up with the planetary model and there are 

orbits! So if we have the Hydrogen this is what it would 

look like!!!” 

“Wow!!!” 

EMAIL:

Schrodinger the Squirrel- Hey guys`s

Ernest the Iguana- Hey..

Bohr: Hello!

JJ Thomson the Jaguar- What up man

Schrodinger the Squirrel- Well I kinda disagree with you 

guys… I think the atom is in a shape of an electron 

cloud. It’s kind of like a cloud and it has the nucleus in 

the middle, the lowest energy is the closest to the 

nucleus. But the highest is the farthest away.

Everyone- WOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! 

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