One day there was a girl named Tin Noah. Tin lived in Pakistan with her 1 brother and 1 sister and Papa Roth Mama Nola and Pampa Dogo. One day Tin was exploring with her sister, Fei. Fei touched and felt around the thick area. Tin suddenly fell in a hole. Mud caked her face. Fei laughed. "Fei! FEI! Help Me!!!" Fei shouted, "No!Ha! Ha! You stupid girl. You fell right in! Me and our brother cooked up a delicious plan...and you are now frying in it! We will tell Mama, Papa, and Pampa that you DIED! That is that you will do in that muddy hole! Hahahahahahaaaa!" And Fei was gone. Tin curled up into a ball and slept.

Fei and Tin in the forest.

Tin's delectable home-cooked meals became scorpion meat with a rancid flavor. She rubbed some meat in between 2 leaves. She shoved it into her mouth and forced herself to chew. Her sister's green dress popped into her mind. She swallowed the meat. So then she smelled fresh cookies. She wanted to cry. Suddenly, a rope thicker than her hair dropped into the hole. "Fei! I knew you would come back! I'm weak and hungry. How could you-..?" It wasn't Fei. It was a tall woman with the largest greenest eyes ever. "Hi there! Who the HECK is Fei? And why were you in there? What ever. Lets get you cleaned up sweetheart."

The Green- eyed girl

"I'm Tin. Fei is my sister. She let me fall in there...She walked off laughing." The Green-eyed lady took a fist full of her brown hair. "Oh! That's TERRIBLE! I'm Tati. Though I AM incredibly tall, I'm only 15." Soon they came across a lovely cottage. Tati knocked on the door. "For Tobleu Con cornkua nas del parson es del la sre rona a por navor es compandres el pavins sal! KAY MOMMA!" Tati shouted. Tin looked flummoxed. "I'm from Koro, a small island. Me and my mother talk like that in our home." Another voice rang out. "Tati? Kevina? Noro Korto? Nati Por navor For Tavor es pandar!!" A woman with thick hair lumbered down some stairs. She was young. "Hello," she said.

I'm Tati's mother. You must be starving! Here have some rice." She scooped out a lump of rice and heated it up. "Lima beans? Sweet Tea? Oh, and by the way, I am Dondi." Tin's reply came quick. "Yes please Miz Dondi."

After each buttery forkful of rice and delicious mouthful of Lima Beans made Tin think of home. Soon she was drifting off to sleep. Knok, Knok, Knok. The front door was uttering a sharp jab. "Hello, I am Fei, sister of Tin. I am looking for her. She went missing just 2 days ago." OH - NO! Fei was coming! "Oh. I'm indeed sorry. We know no one by that name." Fei burst into tears. "My sister," She managed in between sobs. "She is dead because of me. Her body rotted."

Tin hiding from her sister.