To My teacher because she willl grade this

It was the day before Easter and all the children were running through the town with excitment. Mady was determend to find the most eggs this year and she had a plan. She was training her dog Billy to find eggs. Billy would jump around like a kangaroo trying to find the eggs. (simile)

Mady would hide the eggs in the woods and Billy would go find them. When ever Billy found an egg he would tap it. The egg would sway like it was cowwering in fear then Billy would bring the egg to Mady.(Personification). Soon there was a big pill of eggs in front of Mady. For every egg Billy got a treat.

It was the big day Mady was waiting with the other kids. Mady scand the meadow trying to see as meny eggs as possible. Then in the middle of the field she saw Billy! He was collecting eggs before the time started. It was the END he had ruined everything. (Hyperbole)

When Mady's parents found out what Mady had done they took her into the house."Woof" Billy said almost like he senced something was wrong. (Onomomipia) (personification)

"You have been quite the fox by not telling use", her parents said. (Metaphor). They told her that since she had not been fair to the other kids by training Billy. She would have to go to her room and do her homework for the rest of the day. No Easter egg hunt.

So Mady went up stairs and started her Alliteration homework. She was supposed to read each sentence and say the sound that was being repeated. The first one was Two taste tacos.(alliteration) When Mady finished she started pacing the room. She was mad.

Mady decided she was going to go outside and play no matter what her parents said. She tied a rope to the hook beside her window and decided to climd out the window. Her foot left a print on the carpet. (consonance t sound). Then She jumped and ran into the woods.

"Your a Wizard Harry." She said proudly.(Allusion)

Mady decided to run away forever. She got Billy from his pen then ran into the woods. She went to her special hiding place under the apple tree. Mady picked some apples. Then tried to light the fire.(Assonance)

"My parents really rubbed me the wrong way today." Mady muttered to herself.(Idiom)