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This story takes place in a dystopianversion of chicago in the future.Setting
Characters
Protagonists
Antagonists
Eric
Tris
Four
Max
Marcus
ConflictAfter finishing his training to become adauntless soldier, Four was chosen to
become a dauntless leader. Max said that
he should not go to the job choosing
ceremony. Max says, he can make him a
great leader, but it will take lots of training.
Four did not agree because he wanted to
be just a trainer. Finally, Four gave in, and
decided to try to become a leader, but was not very
happy about it.
Rising ActionFour realizes that in his new apartment,someone is sneaking in and looking through
his stuff. One day he finds a note that reads,
"In the place where you first jumped, at the time
when she died, on the day you hated the most."
He is very confused from this note, who could it
be from?
Who has been in here!?
Rising ActionOnce four figures out that some has been in
his room, he goes right to the control room.
He knows his friend works there and will let
him look at the footage of his room. Before
finding that, he finds footage of Jeanine
Matthews (Evil Leader) talking to Max
(Fours trainer). He is not sure what to think
of this, so he just goes back to his room.
Rising ActionFour figured out, the only person who could have wrote
the note, was his mom, who passed away years ago. He
has no idea how this was possible, but did not have time
to think. He headed for the train, and arrived just on
time, 2:00AM. He soon sees a person who he easily
recognizes as his mom. She never really died, but faked
her death to lead the faction-less. She told him that
things were changing, and he needed to come with her.
He was confused, and VERY frustrated that she never
told him she was alive. Being so angry, he leaves,
refusing to come with his mom.
Climax
Falling ActionOnce Four realizes that the factions are being
un-loyal (Like his Mom said), he decides to
get a tattoo that shows all the factions
symbols together. He got this tattoo to show
his hatred for these factions working
together.
This is very bad! Why arethe factions working together?
Falling ActionSince Max has been very suspicious lately, Four
decided he would quit the leadership program. He
knew that Max should not be trusted, and so he told
Max he would like to become a trainer and security
worker instead.
Sir, I am going to quit.
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